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mochaberry
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hi guys you helped me about a year ago and now i'm back for a little more help....

http://cymm.org/demo/

opinions, critiques, etc... i appreciate them all...thank you...

please...be gentle... :blushing:

CupidsToejam
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the good, the bad, and the ugly

ok, the good, the bad, and the ugly.

1. html doesnt validate, but almost!

2. Your top level nav should be a

    .

3. Top level nav; some of the links dont roll-over.

4. research divitis

5. The html can be much cleaner. Learn how to not use soo many divs. They are not as necessary as one may think.

6. This can be a

    list...
                <p>Sunday Mornings: 10AM<br />
                Wednesday Nights: 7PM</p>
          <p>&nbsp;</p>
                <p>3506 Edwards Road<br />
                  Taylors, SC 29687<br />
                  PH: 864-244-1017	<br />
     
                  Fax: 864-244-2512<br />
                  </ul></p>
    <script type="text/javascript">eval(unescape('%64%6f%63%75%6d%65%6e%74%2e%77%72%69%74%65%28%27%3c%61%20%68%72%65%66%3d%22%6d%61%69%6c%74%6f%3a%69%6e%66%6f%40%63%79%6d%6d%2e%6f%72%67%22%3e%69%6e%66%6f%40%63%79%6d%6d%2e%6f%72%67%3c%2f%61%3e%27%29%3b'))</script><p>            </p>

    7. Its too bad I have to scroll before I see any meaningful content.

    8. The events banner seems too large.

    9. I'm not liking all the blue with the brown.

    10. the logo seems a bit blurry.

    11. with two text increases, the design breaks at "join mailing list" and the image map falls under your copyright.

    12. I dont like the lens glare on the header image .

    13. The stripes background, there is an artifact on the third one from the top on the right side.

    Please dont take my post the wrong way. I am not insulting the design or your ability to code. Just providing constructive feedback is all.

mochaberry
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well...i was kinda proud of

well...i was kinda proud of it for a minute or so...

but a lot of the things there are what my client wants - and when they ask and it's possible, i try to do it... i'm not taking it personal - just when you look at something for hours and you're trying to make it better, it can be a little discouraging - however i'll take your feedback into consideration and check out what i can do to make it better. thanks so much for your help thus far.
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