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Hi there,

Here is my first pure css website,

Kindly give your expert opinion.

www.dotcomeurope.org

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We've got the site checks area for . . well, site checks Tongue

It's not bad for a first CSS website; it's a shame you've used a table for your product range, but you're still learning so we'll let that go.

Your input box on the left resizes too much and breaks out of the containing box.

You've got soem unnecessary HTML and styling in there, keep this in mind for the next site you develop:

<p><span class="style5"><strong>Sonil Ventilfabrik</strong></span>

no need to wrap it in a span

<h1><strong>In Closing :</strong></h1>

H1 should be for the main page title, and it is bold by default, so there is no need for the strong tags.

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Not bad at all, the attempt to make it tableless is particularly commendable. Your styling is locally a bit overdone as thepineapplehead has pointed out. For instance:
<ul><li><p><a href="">Description</a></p></li></ul>
could very well be replaced with <ul><li><a href="">Description</a></li></ul>
by simply styling the a-tag right.

You may want to get rid of the ul-li pairs, since the products are already wrapped in your tr-td pairs.

Also try to increase the overall contrast. It may be hard to read for people with impaired sight. In other words, the color of the text has too much lightness.

Hope this helps

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Re: visit my website and pls comment

Hi,

i already visited your site... i like the look dude!

nice color, but the product range section ( in the bottom of your main page) not good looking enough for me Sad

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nice color, but the product range section ( in the bottom of your main page) not good looking enough for me

I agree...

Nice site, nice color (maybe, just maybe add alittle more contrast). As far as the products, I think you are headed in the right direction but they need alittle work. Right now, it looks like the content in that box is just floating.

Good job so far! Laughing out loud

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nothingwrongtotryme, is your site still up? I am getting a directory listing.

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Hello. Smile

Good layout for a first CSS site. But design-wise, I strongly suggest a change of colour in your content text. It's really very hard to read even if you make the font size bigger.

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I strongly agree about the need for contrast in the content text. Something closer to indigo would be good.

We all get a little verbose in our code in our first efforts, I think. Keep at it and your site will lose weight and look great.