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Kreativity
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http://www.kryptic.co.za/ 100% W3C Valid. If you think it good please like it, I tried to be as unique as possible. <3

Also all criticism is encouraged, I really want to improve it. Its not 100% Complete because I am waiting for feedback from a few companies on things like reseller hosting plans etc.

Thanks! Smile

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I have a real aversion to

I have a real aversion to empty DIVs or empty anything in markup.

<div class="windmill-cont">
           <div class="windmill"></div>
</div>

<div class="animation">
           <div class="clouds"></div>
      </div>

It doesn't pass the smell test. I'd find another way to do it.

A menu is a list of links.

<!-- Menu Stars -->
                        <div class="home"><h1><a href="index.php">Home</a></h1></div>
                        <div class="request"><h1><a href="contact.php">Hosting</a></h1></div>
                        <div class="services"><h1><a href="contact.php">Services</a></h1></div>
                        <div class="contact"><h1><a href="contact.php">Contact</a></h1></div>
<!-- Menu Ends -->
Use an unordered list instead.

Consider the contrast between text and background in all areas.

All in all it's too heavy, too wordy. I like the look and the font choice though.

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Thanks

Appreciate the feedback. I have fixed the empty div's. Still working on the menu. Thanks for the feedback buddy.

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Fixed all your suggestions :)

Let me know if everything looks alright now Smile?

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Well, I like the design! Good

Well, I like the design!
Good point @Verschwindende.
R4R4iR4 3DS

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Verschwindende wrote:... All

Verschwindende wrote:

... All in all it's too heavy, too wordy. ...

When I said that I meant the code not the text on the page. Too many unnecessary DIVs.